Getting ready for Anaheim, RWA12

So I made my editor and agent appointments this morning. In fact, I just now stopped hyperventilating into a paper sack. As a PRO member of Romance Writers of America, I could register at 9 a.m. so I spent last night making a good list of choices: first, second, third, fourth and if I can’t get her, I’ll just hang by the pool. Based on last year’s experience, I needed to do so.

And then this year, all my choices were available. Some had some rough time slots (last of the day) but everyone was there. So I highlighted the two I never thought I’d have a chance at getting, squeezed my eyes tightly closed and hit “Add” (after I inched one of them open to find the button because, you know, it’s hard to see with your eyes shut).

And now the second-guessing starts. Why do you think you have anything to show them? Why would you waste her time? Why would she pick you over all the other people she’s going to see?

Last year the Harlequin editor was really lovely to speak with. I came back from that meeting encouraged. I was also rattled because it’s some kind of cattle call situation with shouted orders and proper lines to stand in, but I think I can do better this year. I actually have books out there. I am a winner, almost. I have a resume now. I’m good enough, smart enough, and, doggone it, people like me.

I should probably get busy and, you know, write something. Quickly.

Dear Marshal Marshall Mann,

So I’m still trying to come to terms with the end of In Plain Sight. I’m going to miss you and Mary but mostly you. I loved the snappy dialogue but more than anything I wanted to see you. Tall, dork, and handsome is the new hot. I have no doubt about that. I have high hopes that Frederick Weller will show up somewhere else in TVland, but I can’t imagine another character that I want to have as a TV boyfriend as much as Marshall. If I ever need to enter WITSEC, I’m asking for an Albuquerque assignment.

Hearts and flowers,

Renee

Checking Out, 4 Cups from Maura at Coffee Time Romance

WOO HOO! How did I miss this? Google Alerts is LETTING ME DOWN! Four coffee cups. I love this story so much. CHECK OUT THIS QUOTE:

The supporting characters are vividly unique, especially Grandma Mimsy and her army of gnomes.  The mystery involving the death of Mina’s parents will keep the reader absorbed, and the author’s sense of humor will have the reader laughing out loud more than once during the story.

You can read the rest of the quote at Coffee Time Romance (click here).

Just Say No: Comma Splices

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As a part of the whole “not being gainfully employed” I’ve gotten so very lucky to have the chance to work as an editor for a publishing company. I really like it.

But…

I’ve been astounded by the overwhelming flood of comma splices. And I am a big fan of the comma. I am not a fan of run-on sentences, especially when they are so easy to fix. All it takes is a period!

What’s a comma place? When you take two complete sentences and jam them together, separated only by a comma, that’s a comma splice.

Ex: I like commas, I don’t like comma splices.

What’s more common is an example like this:

She parked the car, he hopped out of the passenger side, and she watched him run inside.

Use a period!

She parked the car. He hopped out of the passenger side, and she watched him run inside.

This is not the same:

She parked the car, hopped out, and ran inside.

She is the subject of each of these verb. These are not complete sentences. This is a comma splice: She parked the car, she hopped out, and she ran inside.

Exposure excerpt from Ch. 1

I like interracial romance, reading and writing. This is the first short story I wrote. It’s available now from New Concepts publishing. Take a look!

Chapter 1

In situations such as these, Laura’s second thought is always Oh, God, I hope my mother doesn’t hear about this! This is always the second thought but it follows so closely on the heels of the first as to be nearly indistinguishable. First comes Not again! This can’t be happening to me again!

This episode was a little different than the other “oh no” moments that made up her story, which included but were not limited to ripping her costume in her first and last dance recital, exposing her unmentionables to an audience filled with amused spectators and her mother; launching herself completely over her horse at her first and last riding lesson, landing in an undignified heap so as to break her arm in front of a concerned riding coach and her mother; smashing the glass of the observation deck at the tennis club, earning angry glares from both the tennis pro and her mother; and most recently, being divorced by her husband less than one year after one of the biggest society weddings seen in the small southern town in years, earning her the unpitying scrutiny of said society and her mother. After all, what sort of woman ends up married to a gay man? Never mind that her mother engineered the wedding into one of the wealthiest families around with the precision of a master puppeteer.

This time, Laura had no one to blame but herself. Her own haste had caused this dilemma. And this time, Laura had a sufficient amount of time to really dissect all the whys and wherefores that got her here and to ponder possible escapes. But in one way, this time was just like every other mishap, mistake, and misfortune that seemed to follow Laura. Just like all the others, when her mother found out about this one, she was going to be so disappointed.

Laura was stuck. Lonely boredom, hot summer sun, and an empty freezer equaled the perfect storm of ice cream desire. After a fruitless search through the studio apartment’s tiny kitchen, Laura had determined that a trip to the shop around the corner would be the only solution to the craving following her these days. Laura walked there so regularly that the teen Goth-wannabe running the place knew what to serve if she asked for “the usual”. She never did, but she had the feeling that he would remember anyway. Ever mindful of her mother’s warnings, Laura had contemplated changing into more “presentable” attire, but the merciless ticking of the clock towards closing time had her turning from the mirror after a lick and a promise. With her mind already focused on how many scoops it would take to make it back to opening time, Laura rushed through the small apartment, opened the door, turned the lock, stepped through and slammed it behind her. Without her keys.

But that wasn’t what precipitated thoughts one and two. No, what led to this particular “oh no” moment was the realization that her skirt and shirt, gauzy and loose in deference to the aforementioned hot summer sun, were caught in the door. She was caught in the locked door. She was caught on one side of the locked door and her keys were safe and sound on the other side. It’s funny unless it happens to you.

 

Their love affair was forbidden, but nothing was going to stop Jay Hamilton from having the woman of his dreams. He has plans for Laura Bradford, and they don’t just include a photo shoot. He’d been lusting over her from a distance—and after saving her from her latest embarrassing predicament, he fully intends to collect on the debt she owes him.

Length: Short Story, 14,800 words
Genre: Contemporary Interracial Erotica
Rating: Erotica